Friday, September 1, 2017
MT RUAPEHU
Hi bloggers this is my slide about Mt Ruapehu this is all about when we went to the mountain. On our trip challenges for me were
to try get my skis on, trying to beat Mr Ross, going up to Rock garden. When we were there it was fun people were laughing people were lying in the snow. The best part of the mountain was watching Dustine falling in the snow. on our stops to the hotel everyone was getting sick of the bus. The first stop was Hamilton gardens then we went to the school to play for a little while, Then we went to our lunch stop, and then we went to answer all our question, After that we were at our last stop then we had have another big ride to National park. When we got there it was beautiful. We got our keys and then went up to our rooms this was amazing.
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Well done Darlene, you have written heaps about your adventures. You picked up learning to ski so quickly and so well. It was fabulous that you could negotiate Rock Garden. Another day and you would have had a lot of your other friends up there too. Remember to check your work for punctuation errors. I is always a capital letter. Also in your explanation in your blog post you have run sentences together with the word 'then'. Try to write shorter sentences and start them in different ways. Finally you have some work missing from your slideshow that you could go back and complete and add in more photos. There are some great photos of you skiing. Use these on your blog.
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